BEN MOLYNEUX
BTEC Creative Media Unit 22 & 1 Assignment 3
Audiance Responses
incEntivE - AFTER FEEDBACK
Orignial- incntive
Amelia Horner
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Jason first asked his sister for feedback on our early edit, this is what she said:
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"Overall I liked the opening to your film as it has lots of varied camera angles which was effective in building suspense. I was especially intrigued by the use of a go pro camera to give the audience a unique perspective. The ending of it is very successful as it is ambiguous and encapsulating. The editing is sound and gives the film a professional finish. Throughout the production the actors kept in character and the feeling of tension was skillfully obtained. I would definitely be interested in seeing the film/more of their work. However I found that the lighting in some places was perhaps too dim or didn't fit with the tone of the scene."
audiance feeback-UNIT 22
MISS LOWDON
Here is the feedback we got from Miss Lowdon after showing her an early edit:
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""I really enjoying watching this, great stuff. The character is portrayed in a way that I think adds real mystery about him and his backstory, which makes for a gripping opening. Some of the fonts however are too stylised and should be kept simple to remain conventional. I also think that a good idea would be to cut back how long the character looks at the alcohol bottle".
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Miss Lowdon also sent myself ideas and suggestions for additional improvements which could be made further to improve our product after I created the first edit:
